Essay outline for essay #3
Topic:Does family shape one's identity? How? Why?
Intro:
- who you are
- who are you related to
- the way you act and speak
- how you come across people
Paragraph #1
- positives
- relationships within family
- respect
- helping
- role models
- being able to understand one another
Paragraph #2
- negatives
- abuse within family
- lack or love & comfort
- not being dependable
Conclusion
- my opinions
- my family
- what i consider myself because of my family
- where i stand in this world
so i noticed mine isnt as long as yours. i like your outline..im almost jelous...almost but not yet. but anyways i like your outline alot and has good points and stuff. i hope you do it and get 3 to 4 pages....i must. LOL
ReplyDeleteI like the content you are providing for your topic, but I believe that it can be broken into more paragraphs than just four. Make more like seven to ten paragraphs since you need at least three pages. If you break it down and add more to the subject within each paragraph, you will easily reach three to four pages.
ReplyDeleteI think you have good ideas and you will have no problem writing this essay. I also think that family shapes people’s identity and I stole some ideas from you. I hope you don’t mind.
ReplyDeleteYou have a really good outline! It looks well prepared which will help you when you start your essay. There are many good points which should fill up 3 pages with no problems!I like how you added the negatives in there, not only showing how the good things help shape us but also the bad ones. GOOD JOB :D
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